description: For writing we have to organise our ideas and get proof of them we can write a story if we want to. We have to organise our ideas in groups like setting chacters problems resualtion etc
feedback and feedforward: i like the way you did your planing next time you could ad a bit more to your story. kayla
Evaluation: i could do better at getting my story finished or at least started i loved how we did
something different well to me different.