Description: last week Poutama had to do a writing post we got to chose one piece of writing I chose my dream giver story and this it.
Feed forward: I like how you used lots of discriptive words in your story and the starting sentence really hooked me in. Charlotte W
Feed back: Next time I think you could maybe describe yourself. Charlotte W
Evaluation: I agree with Charlotte I could describe myself in my story next time. Miko